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Time's Apprentice XXI by Atrieisan Time's Apprentice XXI by Atrieisan
And............................. Cliffhanger! :icondannyyayplz:
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Sorry that this is so late. I had a lot to work on the past few weeks. That and I had to rework the story line a bit so it didn't seem so cheesy. (In my opinion. ) On to chapter two!
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:iconkikiwood5:
kikiwood5 Featured By Owner May 25, 2016
man I love clockwork he is ma fav
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:iconcaptainobvious60309:
CaptainObvious60309 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist
Aaaaaaaaaaaand, you f*cked up. Nice Danny, real nice.
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:iconstar-von-alicorn:
Star-Von-Alicorn Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NUUU! CLIFFHANGERZZZZ
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:iconthe-travelingstrange:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Clifhangers. My wrost enemy.
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:iconelemental-dragoneyes:
this comic i amazing  i just found it to and I'm total hocked.
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:iconchaoticdeer:
ChaoticDeer Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MORE!!!
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:iconbeaniepie1:
BeaniePie1 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Noooo! No cliffies! They kill me from the inside!
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:iconmisty-chanxx:
Misty-chanXx Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.... I have become addicted >.>

Yup... It has happened again, I'm into another DeviantArt comic *sigh*

Haha but great job seriously, love the detail and backgrounds! 
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:iconbaby-near-of-cute:
Baby-near-of-cute Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Wgen will there be more? Its soo good i keep checking up on it
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:iconeziophantom409:
eziophantom409 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
when is the next part going to be getting good

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:iconlinzerj:
Linzerj Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...
aiudgbdnkajiuhar

Holy cow the suspense its going to kill me. CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGERS!
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:iconask-hiccup:
Ask-Hiccup Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist
((admin rage: THIS IS NOT OKAY!!!!!!!!!
COMPLETELY UNNAPROPRIATE!!!!!
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I require more of this story. Immediately.))
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
-chuckles- I am working on it. no worries. :)
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:iconlollileahpop:
lollileahpop Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
WOW just WOW its so incredible everything about its... words can not describe how awesome this comic is. pleases make more <3 ~
                                                                      
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:iconhoples:
Hoples Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is gorgeous comic... i really really love it ~
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:iconsc-designz:
SC-Designz Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bad cliff hanger, bad ;3;
But I am loving their expressions, your DP art is awesome!!!! Keep up the amazing work!
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thankyous~ I hope to continue with my work.
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:iconsuntan140:
SUNTAN140 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
great story love it this there a fanfiction version of this story
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:iconbaby-near-of-cute:
Baby-near-of-cute Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
May i ask you when more is coming? it's just so good
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to wait until my computer returns to me in the mail...
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:iconbaby-near-of-cute:
Baby-near-of-cute Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Ok ^^ I can not wait to see more
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:iconmsrocktheclock:
MsRockTheClock Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student General Artist
AHHHHH NEED MORE HOT CLOCKWORK NOW!!!
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:iconkrazii1331:
krazii1331 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D:... Awesome!!!
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:iconty-dragon2:
Ty-Dragon2 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
I'm in love!! I want more, please make more!~
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:iconspiritualpotatoe:
SpiritualPotatoe Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconnuuuuplz:
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:iconj5a:
J5A Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
Wow this is awesome! Please update soon, I need to know what happens next! D:
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:iconsasukes-shadow:
Sasukes-Shadow Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
:iconohnoesplz:
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:iconqueenmimi011:
QueenMimi011 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

S'been a while since I saw this.

"Daniel! I forgot to tell you something!"

"What?!"

" . . . you're a hermaphrodite." DUNDUNDUN!!!!  

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:icondeaddancers:
DeadDancers Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWWW! Damn-finding-it-on-a-cliffie!

I am loving this!
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:iconmanansalacaleb:
manansalacaleb Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Please Update it :(

your works is pretty awesome 
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:iconissyorabbit:
issyorabbit Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
WHAT, NO! YOU CAN'T DO THAT! I was really getting into the story and then I read the cliffhanger and said "alright next page...wait what no, No, NO ERRRHHHH!" Tell me when the next page comes, for the time being i'll be on the floor...crying. 
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:iconthenaiads:
TheNaiads Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
AWESOME *o*, please continue.
This story is too COOL XD
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:iconpaw07:
Paw07 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh... Poor Danny. I can't wait to see what happens next though. :D
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:iconpokemonpuck:
Pokemonpuck Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconkarkatfuryplz: THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING TO ME.




I was just scrolling through random artists and came across you and found this comic and it was all

:iconbamplz: Read. me.
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconta-xdphantomplz: That's so creepy it made me laugh
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:iconpokemonpuck:
Pokemonpuck Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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:iconsasukes-shadow:
Sasukes-Shadow Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Why does clockwork look only 18 years old?!
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He's ever ageing and ever changing. I personally would of said he looks 24. .__.
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:iconsasukes-shadow:
Sasukes-Shadow Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Late teens, early 20's
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:icondangeroustobewith:
DangerousToBeWith Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
IT'S BEEN MONTHS!! I AM DYING!!!!!!!
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And I've been trying not to redie at bootcamp so yippy~ :iconsocuteplz:
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:icondangeroustobewith:
DangerousToBeWith Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Who the hell goes to bootcamp these days?
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anyone joining the Navy!~ :icondannyyayplz: lol
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:icondangeroustobewith:
DangerousToBeWith Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Not me. I'm too young.
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:iconghostgirl58:
GhostGirl58 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Artist
Ahhh shit.... FINISH SOON OR I WILL EXPLODE :P I accouly you take two weeks to finish :3 Two weeks (Setp 4) Is my birthday :D
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:iconheartbreakerninja:
heartbreakerninja Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
and now you've left us with the *AND THEN?!?!?!* suspense! please must know what happens next!

also awesome art work looks amazing :D
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:iconhopeistheway:
hopeistheway Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Artist
ARE YOU KIDDING ME? :( I WANT THE NEXT PAGE!
On a more serious note... I love this story! I feel like Danny's going "back" and the halfa thing will start over. 
I didn't explain that well, but whatever. 
Great job! ^_^
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:iconatrieisan:
Atrieisan Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, he isn't a Halfa in T.A. and his 'going back' is actually meant to instill the reality that he's dead. <<;
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:iconhopeistheway:
hopeistheway Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Artist
Oh wow. He's DEAD? :O well things just got that much more interesting. :) thanks for clearing that up! 
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:iconxaxenia:
xaxenia Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
when will you post again ? really good and very interesting story :D i hope i don't sound very rude or demanding when i say " update sooooonnnn " ! :D
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